2011年6月2日 星期四

*Discussing CauseⅠ*


Marriage is one of the most important affairs in one’s life, and so do I. there are three main reasons result in my decision. To begin with, if a couple get married, plenty of laws which regulate property, behavior as well as children would pop up to guarantee their rights. Therefore, getting married not only ensures my rights but also brings me the sense of security. Next, due to the traditional concept of society, the older one grows, the less valuable one becomes. Owing to the stress society gives, I think I will feel like getting married when I am an adult. Last but not least, if two people get married, I consider it will be more easily for them to carry out their plans. It doesn’t mean that the dream of lovers can’t be taken into practice if they don’t get married. While with the promise of marriage, both of them will be more thoughtful and have more strength to make their dream come true. According as what I mention above, I’d like go into marriage one day.

8 則留言:

  1. Marriage is one of the most important affairs in one’s life, and so do I我覺得這樣寫不太對耶,像動詞一個是is一個是do
    然後好像就沒有了~

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  2. I’d like "" go into marriage one day.
    是不是少to

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  3. 我看不到!
    妳該不會用了隱形斗篷把錯誤的都遮起來吧!
    嘖嘖~

    以上~
    P.S.看看我的名字
    哼哼

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  4. I’d like go into marriage one day.
    i'd like to 吧!

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  5. 1.Marriage is one of the most important affairs in one’s life, and so do I.
    ﹡do→am
    2.there are three main reasons result in my decision.
    ﹡there→There ﹡result→resulting
    3.I’d like go into marriage one day.
    ﹡I'd like to go...

    ﹡以上,淺見…

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  6. 唉~~~~~
    看一次你的文章
    就傷心一次

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  7. I’d like go into marriage one day.
    like跟go之間是不是要加個to比較好??
    其他沒了

    還有趕快把人招出來=ˇ=

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  8. 錯誤上面的都說摟~~

    每次看妳的文章感覺翻譯過來都會很像六級分的作文XD

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