I have great interest in learning language. It is the process of learning and studying language that appeals to me. So far, I have been studying Chinese and English for a long time. And Japanese is the one that I started to learn two years ago. I am also in favor of listening to music, which can be combined with language learning. On the one hand, I can develop both the two hobbies. On the other hand, I can also use it as a tool to improve my listening and speaking of English and Japanese. As for Chinese, I can learn the wording and phrasing as well. At the present time, I make good performance in English listening and reading at school. With the enthusiasm about English, I want to study more and have deep learning in language.
Speaking of my specialty, I can’t help talking about Chinese composition and comic drawing, especially the characters of comics. Sometimes I attend the pertinent contests and send my works to relatives and friends with the coming of holiday or their birthday. In addition, I regard myself as a responsible person. I always do my best when being appointed. Once a teacher asked me to convey message, not only did I tell the person, but I also made sure that he did finished what the teacher told. I believe that trust is the root of all relationship; people who work besides me all know my reliability. Furthermore, I form a habit of keeping diary. As I consider that it can make me question my daily behavior. And it’s true that moderate introspection can give me direction in life.
When it comes to my philosophy, I tend to be independent. I’ll adhere to my goal as no one can replace me to carry out my dreams, even family can only back me up. Therefore, no matter effort or time I should pay, I will do step by step to reach my ideal.
1.Once a teacher asked me to convey message, not only did I tell the person, but I also made sure that he did finished what the teacher told. I believe that trust is the root of all relationship; people who work besides me all know my reliability.
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2.I’ll adhere to my goal as no one can replace me to carry out my dreams, even family can only back me up.
→想問一下為什麼要用replace…
(以上,淺見。)
but I also made sure that he did "finished" what the teacher told
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回覆刪除he did finished 不用ed
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