2011年10月19日 星期三

Future Perspectives


In the modern society, it is essential to have great language ability. Interested in the learning of language for a long time, I hope to take advanced course of language so as to communicate with people from different countries. Aside from developing my own interest, entering the National Taiwan University of Science and Technology can improve my chances of future. In the next four years, I want to make progress in listening, speaking, writing and reading, every aspect of English, and I’d like to pass the GEPT for a higher stage. Furthermore, learning Japanese is also my goal. After having enough communicative skills and basic knowledge of hospitality, I feel like traveling to Japan with family, carrying out the long-held dream of my elderly grandmother. In addition, being an interpreter or editor is my ideal job. My dearest wish is to combine my writing and painting abilities with my language technique and publish my own work. Being admitted in NTUST can help me reach my yearnings. Anyway, I just want to transfer or create what I think is good to people, as a way I express my gratitude to the society that bring my up.

4 則留言:

  1. 1.In the next four years,...
    →這邊這句,感覺平行對稱結構有點亂,建議分成兩句。
    2....as a way I express my gratitude to the society that bring my up.
    →bring應該+s? my應該變成me?

    (以上,淺見。)

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  2. I express my gratitude to the society that bring my up.
    應該是ME吧~~

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  3. as a way I express my gratitude to the society "that bring my up."
    →which brings me up
    我記得當主詞時是用which吧,除了某些特殊的才用that
    應該是這樣吧!= =

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  4. I express my gratitude to the society that bring my up的bring要加s哦
    其他沒看到什麼錯誤哦

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