2011年9月21日 星期三

School Life

Owing to my early interest in English, I studied at Department of Applied Foreign Language in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. These two years, not only did I can concentrate on my favorite language, with teachers’ instruction, although I once disliked math, I also regained my interest in it. English is originally my favorite subject; with the help of teachers and the passion I have had for learning language, I’m glad that my effort paid off. I passed General English Proficiency Test for the intermediate level in my second year in high school.
As for the club I attend, I join the English ABC club as soon as I enter the senior high school in order to improve my English level. We have to learn vocabularies of a chapter every week. Sometimes we also take exams and use the software of English contest. At first, I really confused whether my English ability will make progress or not. Finally, I even attend the word competition in school for class, which I get achievement form it.
I have had the experience of serving as vice bulletin board designer since my junior high. Since I was interested in comic painting, teachers tended to encourage me to serve for class. As a bulletin board designer, I had to remove my eyesight from comic characters to the huge board, and learn the duty division and collaboration. In the past, the comic I created was my own works, while designing post is cooperation. During the process, I was taught the concept of giving the right to others. No matter how great I could draw, I couldn’t do every thing on my own; collaboration can reduce some odds and ends, made me focus on the whole aspect, and represent my confidence to classmates as well. In addition, by recording the process of meeting of class, I gradually learned the skills of writing official papers. I really appreciate that my teachers in junior placed me in a proper position, made me do my utmost in interest and hobbies and finally made progress mentally and physically. Through the previous experience, I could serve as bulletin board designer at easy. Besides, such as speaking on the platform, calculating the budget of materials, the various duty assignment of different topics, are the sections I still have to improve.

4 則留言:

  1. which I get achievement form it.
    應該是要打from吧!!
    I really appreciate that my teachers in junior placed me in a proper position這句的老師要加s嗎?
    還有我覺得時態好像有點不一致欸 >"<

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  2. 1.These two years, not only did I can concentrate on my favorite language, with teachers’ instruction, although I once disliked math, I also regained my interest in it.
    →can要換成am able to,後面的although有點怪,只有兩個子句,卻有兩個連接詞。
    2.I join the English ABC club as soon as I enter the senior high school in order to improve my English level.
    →建議用過去式。
    3.At first, I really confused whether my English ability will make progress or not.
    →will→would
    4. I even...class, which I get achievement form it.
    →form→from
    5.In the past, the comic I created was my own works, while designing post is cooperation.
    →時態統一。
    6.collaboration can reduce some odds and ends, made me focus on the whole aspect, and represent my confidence to classmates as well.
    →助動詞時態也要統一。
    7.I really appreciate that...my utmost in interest and hobbies...
    →in我想換成with。
    8.Through the previous experience, I could serve as bulletin board designer at easy.
    →easy→ease
    9.Besides, such as...calculating the budget of materials, the various...topics, are the sections I still have to improve.
    →善用平行對稱結構:Besides, such as...calculating the budget of materials and the various...topics, are the sections I still have to improve.

    (以上,淺見)

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  3. 第三句not only did I can concentrate on my favorite language有兩個助動辭耶did和can
    我覺得時態有點亂,像I really confused whether my English ability will make progress or not的will應該用would比較適當哦

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  4. not only "did I can" concentrate on my favorite language
    →not only can I concentrate

    我覺得第二段要用過去式

    In the past, the comic I created was my own works, while designing post is cooperation.
    時態要一致

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