Living in a modern generation, there’s no surprise that some students no longer wanted to wear uniform. In my opinion, I approved the idea that students went to school in uniforms. Firstly, if every student wore uniforms to school, it seemed order and it was convenient for school to manage. If everyone wore the same, the rules of clothes can be regulated easily. Secondly, if students of each school dressed in different uniforms, people could identify them by first sight. Every time an activity was held, the school authority could learn students’ identifications and knew which one was their student. Lastly, wearing uniforms could prevent students from spending too much time in choosing their clothes to school every day. While some thought that it couldn’t reach everyone’s requirement, I considered that one could make little change on their clothes in circumstances of not being punished. Because of these facts, it is self-evident that it’s better to wear uniforms to school.
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回覆刪除沒看到錯的呀.....
嗯?
回覆刪除錯誤在哪?
it seemed order 是什麼意思?
回覆刪除the rules of clothes can be regulated 因為整篇刀用過去是縮已can改成could比較好吧
然後為什麼結論句又變成現在式呢?
我找不到錯的0.0
回覆刪除If everyone wore the same, the rules of clothes "can" be regulated easily.
回覆刪除這裡應該用過去式
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回覆刪除妳文章好長ㄜ……
(以上,淺見…)
為什麼都是用過去式呀?
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