2011年3月13日 星期日

*A Frightening Experience*



It was the most horrible experience that I have had in my ninth grade.
We students had to study at school at night and take turns throwing the leftover. That night was my turn to do this task, which one had to go down the dark, vastly long corridor and trees alone. Just after my several steps to go back, I heard a slight sound which was like something falling on the ground. Suddenly, I noticed that there was an object in front of me, just four meters away. Since all lights had turned off, I couldn’t recognize what it was. Additionally, I was too afraid to get close to the unknown stuff. What with the appearance of the moon, what with my eyes’ adaptation to the darkness, gradually, the identity of the figure finally came out.
It was a pigeon whose chest was rotten with a large amount of blood pouring out from it. As the pigeon fell from the air to the ground, I stiffly moved my sight up and surprised to find the suspect easily. One was because it smack stood on the branch which was above its prey, the other was because there was only one animal, a squirrel, which has a bloody mouse looking down from trees.
I stunned into silence as I saw the squirrel’s eyes staring sharply at the moribund, shivering pigeon, and some sort of fright took the place of my favor to gentle squirrels.


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後記
* pigeon = 鴿子
* squirrel = 松鼠

6 則留言:

  1. 第一句應該是I had had.....
    ㄜ......你的用字好深呀
    我太弱了...看不懂
    所以你到底看到
    哪種生物呀???

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  2. 我看了好久還是不太懂哈哈
    是看到留很多血的鴿子嗎
    然後是松鼠咬他的嗎?

    大致上應該都沒問題吧~~~

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  3. 妤如都寫得好有深度噢..
    感覺每一個感覺和情景都描述得很清楚
    都會有畫面跑出來呢
    讚啦:D

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  4. 1.What with ..., what with ..., gradually, the identity of the figure finally came out.
    →What with ..., what with ...; gradually, the identity of the figure finally came out.
    2.One was because it smack stood on the branch which was above its prey, the other was because there was only one animal, a squirrel, which has a bloody mouse looking down from trees.
    →One was because it smack stood on the branch which was above its prey; the other was because there was only one animal, a squirrel, which has a bloody mouse looking down from trees.(這句我只幫你改了分號,另外smack如果當名詞,就會有兩個主詞,如果當動詞,後面要+of,不明白這邊妳想表示的是…?後面a squirrel, which has a bloody mouse...用has的意思是…?我程度比較低,看不懂耶Q___Q)
    3.I stunned into silence as I saw the squirrel’s eyes staring sharply at the moribund, shivering pigeon, and some sort of fright took the place of my favor to gentle squirrels.
    →I was stunned into silence as I saw the squirrel’s eyes staring...
    (以上,淺見…題外話,這好像在講你的叢林冒險記- A -)

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  5. It was the most horrible experience that I have had in my ninth grade. 這邊時態不一致。
    看妤如的文章都很享受,雖然這一篇有點恐怖,顛覆了我對松鼠的印象(如果我解讀的沒錯的話,應該是松鼠咬了鴿子?)
    剛剛確定了松樹是肉食性動物...
    以上。

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  6. there was only one animal, a squirrel, which "has" a bloody mouse looking down from trees.
    是過去式吧!


    裡面有好多我不懂的單字
    =口=我太弱了~~~

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