2011年5月26日 星期四

*Expressing an OpinionⅠ*



Nowadays, one of the most hotly debated issues was whether the death sentence was a reasonable form of punishment or not. As far as I am concerned, I support to use it as a punishment. Of course some people would say that it was cruel and against the human rights, but I deemed that they never stood in other’s shoes. If one day their beloved ones were murdered, I thought they would not insist on their idea. To begin with, it’s the most powerful way to penalize someone who committed crime, for once using this punishment, that criminal was not be able to commit anymore. Next, if a convict committed repeatedly and never repented, the death penalty was the only way to stop it from doing again. Last, if the death sentence was conducted, there would be fewer people to commit crime. Since they knew if they did so, there was only a consequence, death. Taking into an account all of these points, it should be clear that the death penalty should be used as a punishment.

8 則留言:

  1. 寫這麼好幹麻呀!!
    不合群喔~~~~
    XDDDDDD

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  2. 每次都沒東西可以改...
    哼我傷心了(啥鬼
    真想把你的腦挖出來研究看看(燦笑

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  3. 我覺得 時太不太一致耶
    其他沒什麼問題

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  4. there would be fewer people "to commit" crime.
    這裡是不是要用committing

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  5. 恩....
    做的太好啦!
    都讓我幫你+1了起來!
    ((名副其實

    以上~

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  6. 時態注意一下就好。
    我也贊成死刑 ㄏㄏ

    (以上,淺見…)

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