2011年5月19日 星期四

＊Contrasting-Ⅱ＊

Wanting to hire an English instructor, I compared Lynn Whitenall and Debra Fines' résumés and selected the latter. To begin with, the education experience of Debra was much more than Lynn's. Debra has taught triple universities than Lynn. Next, Debra had been hired as various position of language while Lynn's were few. Then, Lynn learned four languages; in contrast, Debra learned two. But since what I wanted was an English instructor, Debra didn't seem to be worse than Lynn. Lastly, unlike Lynn who won a teaching award, Debra didn't have any; whereas, Debra has published plenty of English-related books. Judging from differences above, I chose Debra for an English instructor for my school in the end.
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  1. 芳珠2011年5月19日 下午2:48

    I compared Lynn Whitenall and Debra Fines' résumés and selected the latter.
    應該是Lynn Whitenall's and Debra Fines' résumés
    然後其他應該沒問題^^

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  2. 篔簹2011年5月25日 晚上11:22

    Lynn跟Debra的自傳是兩個不一樣的自傳吧?
    所以應該改成Lynn Whitenall's and Debra Fines' résumés

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  3. 冠伶2011年5月26日 下午2:29

    1.Wanting to hire an English instructor, I compared Lynn Whitenall and Debra Fines' résumés and selected the latter.
    →Wanting to hire an English instructor, I compared Lynn Whitenall's résumés with Debra Fines' and selected the latter.
    2.Next, Debra had been hired as various position of language while Lynn's were few.
    →Next, Debra had been hired as various positions of language while Lynn's had been few.
    3.But since what I wanted was an English instructor, Debra didn't seem to be worse than Lynn.
    →However, since what I wanted was an English instructor, Debra didn't seem to be worse than Lynn.
    4....Debra didn't have any; whereas, Debra has published...
    →...Debra didn't have any, whereas Debra had published...
    5.Judging from differences above, I chose Debra for an English instructor for my school in the end.
    →Judging from differences above, I chose Debra for an English instructor of my school in the end.

    (以上，淺見…)

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  4. 宜珍2011年5月26日 下午2:29

    Lynn Whitenall
    應該改成Lynn Whitenall 'S

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  5. 品婷2011年5月29日 凌晨12:02

    Next, Debra had been hired 是不是用has been就好了?
    我覺得寫得不錯

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  6. 亭安2011年5月29日 晚上9:27

    Lynn Whitenall and Debra Fines' résumés
    應該是Lynn Whitenall's and Debra Fines'

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  7. 孟萱2011年6月2日 下午2:14

    I compared Lynn Whitenall and Debra Fines' résumés and selected the latter.
    要改成Lunn Whitenall's and Debra Fines'哦

    resumes還特地用上重音
    真用心^^

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