“Take these wings” is such a beautiful song that I was deeply moved on hearing it at the chorus.
“I found a sparrow…Her life I knew would soon be at an end….she said, ‘My friend, take these wings and learn to fly….’” In the first paragraph, the sparrow which is going to die wants to devote what she possesses to the human. I admire her nobility for it’s difficult for us to give even we know that we can’t be the owner. As for the refrain, “‘Take these eyes and learn to see, all the things so dear to me. Take these songs…fill your voice with all the joys of spring….’” Although she is on the verge of dying, she still tries to teach people to treasure what we hold. Tiny as eyes or songs, we should appreciate their existence. Moreover, we should cherish everything we have and make the best use of it as well. “I found another sparrow…whose life had just begun….I smiled at him and said, ‘My son, take these wings….’” The spirit of rebirth and the chain of love really appeal to me. I realize that there is always laughter following behind the sorrow, which inspires me to stay joyful as suffering the pain.
I was touched not only by the elegant music but also by the spirit inside it. And I also learned a lot from the sweet lyrics.
I admire her nobility for it’s difficult for us to give even we know that we can’t be the owner.
回覆刪除我看不懂這句 >"<
雖然妤如有解釋過......但我還是有點不懂 >"<
整體來說應該沒問題吧~~
1.In the first paragraph, the sparrow which is going to die wants to devote what she possesses to the human.
回覆刪除→In the first paragraph, the sparrow which is dying wants to devote what she possesses to the human.(不能說妳錯,只是覺得用be going to好像是自己要去死Q_____Q)
2.Although she is on the verge of dying, she still tries to teach people to treasure what we hold.
→Although she is on the verge of death, she still tries to teach people to treasure what we hold.
(以上,淺見…)
每次看妤如的文章都是用欣賞跟讚嘆的角度,
回覆刪除你真的是我的同學對吧?
其實我每次看妳的文章都好累噢
回覆刪除因為寫得太好了
以致於我找不到錯誤哈哈
唉唉唉~
回覆刪除妳的文章可不可以給點錯字呀!
>"<
以上~
辛苦了!
Tiny as eyes or songs, we should appreciate their existence這據我有點不懂耶
回覆刪除寫的很詳細呢
你的文章都好好喔~
回覆刪除很難找到錯誤
欽佩~欽佩~
應該是沒有錯了吧(認真
回覆刪除真不愧是妤如
太神了XD
你可以當老師了(誠懇
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