In history, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are two man whose backgrounds are nearly identical. Although John was born on October 19th, 1735 while Thomas was born on April 13th, 1743, they both died on July 4th, 1926. And similarly, they played important role in American Revolution. Likewise, both of them were delegates to the Continental Congress. Additionally, John and Thomas are alike in being the president of United States
whose backgrounds are nearly identical.
回覆刪除應該用were過去是比較好
其他都很好...
And similarly, they played important role in American Revolution.
回覆刪除role要+s哦:D
role要加s吧?
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John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are two man whose backgrounds are nearly identical.
回覆刪除應該是men
they played important role in American Revolution.
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1.In history, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are two man whose backgrounds are nearly identical.
回覆刪除→In history, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson were two man whose backgrounds were nearly identical.
2.It is so interesting that we can find four similar features between two men.
→這麼寫會不妥嘛…?在兩個人身上找到4個共通點似乎不很難@@"
(以上，淺見…)
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回覆刪除In history, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are two man
回覆刪除裡的 are是were
還有 man 是 men 喔!
以上~
時太好像有點不一致
回覆刪除they played important role 要加s
n history, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are two "man"
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they played important "role" in American Revolution.
要加s
我覺得第一句跟最後一句用現在式比較適當，然後they played important role的role要加s ^_^
回覆刪除妤如這次是故意留個小錯誤讓我們改嗎?
小女子感激不盡>///<