What amazing when you find the information on driver licenses of two people are almost the same, such as Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman. First, Stephanie was born on July 31st, 1970. Likewise, Ann was born on July 31st, 1970. In addition, the color of Stephanie’s eyes is similar to that of Ann’s, is brown. Moreover, both Stephanie and Ann have a black hair. Even more, Stephanie is as high as Ann. It is hard to believe that there are two driver licenses which information is alike except the name.
What amazing應該是How amazing
回覆刪除然後It is hard to believe that there are two driver licenses which information is alike except the name
→which應該改成whose，except後面要加for
其他都不錯=)
except "for" the name
回覆刪除就醬= =
What amazing when you find the information on driver licenses of two people are almost the same,
回覆刪除What要改成How哦:D
except the name
回覆刪除少了for
應該就沒了(汗顏
both Stephanie and Ann have a black hair.
回覆刪除是不是不用加a阿
except the name
少了for
1.What amazing when you find the information on driver licenses of two people are almost the same, such as Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman.
回覆刪除→How amazing it will be when you find the information on driver licenses of two people are almost the same, such as Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman!
(印象中文法上好像有這麼一條不成文的規定…感嘆句的句尾似乎要!驚嘆號…)
2.In addition, the color of Stephanie’s eyes is similar to that of Ann’s, is brown.
→(後面的is brown好像平坦的草原冒出一隻小兔子…總覺得哪裡怪怪的呢…是不是要加關代呢?)
3.Moreover, both Stephanie and Ann have a black hair.
→Moreover, both Stephanie and Ann have black hair.(頭髮不只一根吧…)
4.It is hard to believe that there are two driver licenses which information is alike except the name.
→It is hard to believe that there are two driver licenses whose information is alike except for the name.
(喜歡結論句。如果排除錯誤不看的話…)
(以上，淺見…)
What amazing when you find the information on driver licenses
回覆刪除裡的 what 是how 喔!
Moreover, both Stephanie and Ann have a black hair.
裡的 a hair 我會刪掉"a"
((這好像我小時候畫的男生-永遠只有一根直立的短毛在頭上XDDD
以上~
What amazing
回覆刪除中間要加a
both Stephanie and Ann have "a" black hair.
a應該要去掉
It is hard to believe that there are two driver licenses "which" information is alike except the name.
是whose吧~
In addition,~, is brown. 這邊，我想問阿，為什麼後面可以直接寫is brown?
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